RSS Feed Random Comic Add To Favorites Kyo's adventure is proudly hosted by Smack Jeeves Webcomic Hosting.

intro

June 21st, 2010, 7:08 am

Average Rating: None
<< First < Previous Next > Most Recent >>

Author's Comments:

Reply Advertisement, August 18th, 2017, 6:43 pm

User's Comments:

Reply ON MY GODDAMN PSP (Guest), June 21st, 2010, 7:26 am

k then here's crit.
1.I like your sprites but it still needs better shading in some areas.
2.Kyo's brightest shade on his jacket is too bright.
3.Script writting helps the story and dialog. The dialog doesn't seem completly right here...
4.Last panels bg isn't dark enough and the evil face could look better.

Interesting so far, keep it up.

Reply Dwayn_2303, June 21st, 2010, 7:37 am

i was lazy at that part =P

Reply Dwayn_2303, June 21st, 2010, 7:39 am

and thanks DGF

Post A Comment